bang bang

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a walk in the park/my heart goes bang bang, thinking of you/I shout at the East River hoping it will shout back/where do you go at night, is it to the one who calls you, the one you love/when I thought that me and you will end, I/didn’t think it would be like this,/a thousand branches floating away

11 responses to “bang bang”

  1. Destiny Avatar
    Destiny

    a lovely flow…but something about the poignancy grips …

    to this I wonder if it ever happens what will we actually do…”hoping it will shout back”
    🤍

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      cookie

      a lost cause, the river never does. thank you, Destiny.

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      1. Destiny Avatar
        Destiny

        the next time you shout …give me a heads up….I’ll shout back 😁(just kidding)
        pleasure, Cookie 🤍💫

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      2. cookie Avatar
        cookie

        🤍🎵♥️

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  2. Sara Flower Avatar
    Sara Flower

    Such a melancholic song. ❤️ It sounds beautiful.

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      cookie

      oh, thank you, Sara. melancholy and me, that’s the entire band.

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      1. Sara Flower Avatar
        Sara Flower

        It creates some beautiful music.
        As long as you have a lot of happy moments too.

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      2. cookie Avatar
        cookie

        I’m happy. sometimes. like everyone, I guess. x

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      3. Sara Flower Avatar
        Sara Flower

        That’s very normal. 🙂 And like you say sometimes melancholy is good for creating art.

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  3. STAR CRUSH Avatar
    STAR CRUSH

    Beautiful song Cookie! I love the build up and crescendo to the final poignant line.

    your words

    a glass dagger

    that falls from infinity

    and shatters into a galaxy of swirling pieces

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      cookie

      hey thanks, and what have you been up to?

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