disco

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in the hood of being beautiful/the N holds its breath like snow/soundless as disco/I search out the window for you/while we’re still close enough to Surf Avenue/I know I’m failing/running out of time/it’s me on the inside/and you on the out/I open Notes to write you a letter/the train seems to sigh/please let’s never die like disco/I wrote, not ever

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  1. Vegan Poet Avatar
    Vegan Poet

    A sublime journey replete with the endearing thrum of a genuine heartbeat.

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      cookie

      that’s a cool review 🙂

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    Destiny

    I really like how your words flow here… and expressed so well too. Another lovely share, Cookie 🤍

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      cookie

      the N train really does sigh. thank you.

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        Destiny

        my pleasure 🤍

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  3. Michele Lee Avatar
    Michele Lee

    Wonderful cookie! Echoes a train on the tracks. Moving along…

    “please let’s never die like disco” 😊👍🏻

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      heartbeats are all around even trains have them and disco did, too

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        Michele Lee

        Poetically said. 💓 Oh, yes, I was a youngster, but I do remember watching Soul Train. 🕺🏻🪩 We’re establishing a theme here. 🚂🎶 🙌🏻

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    STAR CRUSH – Stripped (Playlist) – Bruised Rose Blossoms

    […] I’ve been doing so much production lately, here is a playlist of some of my more bare-hearted emanations, often featuring live piano and vocals.  Thanks to Cookie Nieves for reminding me of the primacy of voice and instrument.  Check out Disco. […]

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  5. Sara Flower Avatar
    Sara Flower

    I really love this song! Acoustic guitars are really special. It’s a nice vibe.

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      cookie

      Sara, I’m humbled and honored. x

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        Sara Flower

        😊

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    Small🌏

    NICE POST 💖💓💚

    I am new follower. I hope follow my blog and GROW TOWETHER.

    Together we grow if we read, like and comment on our posts. THANK YOU 

    Greetings from SPAIN 🇪🇦

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    cookie

    hola david y bienvenido

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